Granted the Crouch story is one we're hearing in retrospect rather than seeing it play out--JKR's good at those. When it comes to people dealing with each other in the present it's maybe harder to show subtle changes and things with her style. This this just seemed all over the place to me, even if I can try to connect the dots in my head.
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Date: 2007-09-27 01:39 pm (UTC)